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The table illustrates the proportion of monthy household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. v.2

The table illustrates the proportion of monthy household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. v. 2
The table demonstrates the proportion of money people in five European nations spends on 4 different items every month. Overall, it is obvious that residents in five countries spend most of their income on food and drinks and housing. Their wages spent on clothing and entertainment were significant lower. In terms of food and drink, households in Turkey and Spain send the largest amount of their money on this item, at 36% and 31% respectively. Citizens in Frech, UK and Germany spend less income on food and drink, roughly more than 22%. On the other hand, these three nations spend more than 30% of their wages on housing while Turkish and Spanish just use less than 20% of their income for housing. Clothing is the item that people in all countries spend the least money on. People in France and Spain only spend 7% and 8% on clothing, while residents in UK, Turkey and Germany spend more money on this, at 11%, 12% and 15% respectively. The percentage of household income spend on entertainment of all countries rank from 10% to 19%.
The table demonstrates the proportion of
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money
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people
in five European nations
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spends
on 4
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different
items every month.

Overall
, it is obvious that residents in five countries
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spend
most of their
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income
on food and drinks and housing. Their wages spent on clothing and entertainment were significant lower.

In terms of food and drink, households in Turkey and Spain
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send
the largest amount of their
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money
on this item, at 36% and 31%
respectively
. Citizens in
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Frech
, UK and Germany
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spend
less
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income
on food and drink, roughly more than 22%.
On the other hand
, these three nations
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spend
more than 30% of their wages on housing while Turkish and Spanish
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just
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use
less than 20% of their
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income
for housing.

Clothing is the item that
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people
in all countries
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spend
the least
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money
on.
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People
in France and Spain
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only
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spend
7% and 8% on clothing, while residents in UK, Turkey and Germany
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spend
more
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money
on this, at 11%, 12% and 15%
respectively
. The percentage of household
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income
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spend
on entertainment of all countries rank from 10% to 19%.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportion of monthy household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. v. 2

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4 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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