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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment in five European countries. v.1

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment in five European countries. v. 1
The table compares the allocation of monthly earning in five different European countries (France, Germany, UK, Turkey And Spain). According to the statistic, in general, it is clearly seen that most countries spend heavily of their income on housing compared to other household aspects. To begin with, the largest allocation of income in terms of food and drink is experienced by Turkey. This figure stands at 36%, but other aspects, such as housing, clothing, and entertainment, are just under 30% of the proportion of monthly household income. In contrast, even though Germany’s citizens allocate just 22% of their earning in food and drink, but in other household aspects, they spend heavily than other countries. This figure is considered as the biggest expenditure. Three countries, namely France, the UK, and Spain, have smaller proportions of household income in clothing. These stand at 7%, 11%, and 8%, but the largest expenditure in France is in housing, this figure is the same with the UK, at only 37%. However, the biggest allocation of monthly income in Spain is experienced in food and drink, at 31%. In entertainment aspect, most countries allocate just under 20% of their earning monthly.
The table compares the allocation of
monthly
earning in five
different
European
countries
(France, Germany, UK, Turkey And Spain). According to the statistic,
in general
, it is
clearly
seen
that most
countries
spend
heavily
of their
income
on housing compared to
other
household
aspects.

To
begin
with, the largest allocation of
income
in terms of food and drink
is experienced
by Turkey. This figure stands at 36%,
but
other
aspects, such as housing, clothing, and entertainment, are
just
under 30% of the proportion of
monthly
household
income
.
In contrast
,
even though
Germany’s citizens allocate
just
22% of their earning in food and drink,
but
in
other
household
aspects, they spend
heavily
than
other
countries
. This figure
is considered
as the biggest expenditure.

Three
countries
,
namely
France, the UK, and Spain, have smaller proportions of
household
income
in clothing. These stand at 7%, 11%, and 8%,
but
the largest expenditure in France is in housing, this figure is the same with the UK, at
only
37%.
However
, the biggest allocation of
monthly
income
in Spain
is experienced
in food and drink, at 31%.

In entertainment aspect, most
countries
allocate
just
under 20% of their earning
monthly
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment in five European countries. v. 1

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