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5. The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relev v.2

5. The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
The table depicts the comparison of the monthly household salary of France, Germany, UK, Turkey and Spain on various activities. Overall, Turkey spends more for Food and Drink, UK for Housing, Germany for clothing and entertainment. The people of France and Spain does not stand at the top for any particular field. In all the countries the major share is for the food and drink, and the least bothered is the clothing. In food and drink sector the maximum share holders are the humans in Turkey with 36 percent. They give minor value to housing in contrast to food and drink as there is a fall of 16%. Spain occupies the next top contributor in the area of food and drink. The native people of that region give least respect to clothing as they provide only 8% to it. UK spends more money in housing, which is the greatest peak that has not been contributed by anyone in comparison with all the sectors. They give equal importance to both clothing and entertainment. France also gives more importance to housing which hold a share of 31%, they do not care on clothing as their value for them is given by 7%. They also provide a good share for food and drink field. Germans are also more curious with 33%. They also give little respect to clothing and entertainment by 15% and 19% respectively.
The table depicts the comparison of the monthly household salary of France, Germany, UK, Turkey and Spain on various activities.

Overall
, Turkey spends more for
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Food
and
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Drink
, UK for Housing, Germany for clothing and entertainment. The
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people
of France and Spain does not stand at the top for any particular field. In all the countries the major
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share
is for the
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food
and
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drink
, and the least bothered is the clothing.

In
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food
and
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drink
sector the maximum
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share
holders are the humans in Turkey with 36 percent. They
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give
minor value to housing
in contrast
to
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food
and
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drink
as there is a fall of 16%. Spain occupies the
next
top contributor in the area of
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food
and
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drink
. The native
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people
of that region
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give
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least
respect to clothing as they provide
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only
8% to it. UK spends more money in housing, which is the greatest peak that has not
been contributed
by anyone
in comparison
with all the sectors. They
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give
equal importance to both clothing and entertainment.

France
also
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gives
more importance to housing which hold a
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share
of 31%, they do not care on clothing as their value for them is
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given
by 7%. They
also
provide a
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good
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share
for
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food
and
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drink
field. Germans are
also
more curious with 33%. They
also
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give
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little
respect to clothing and entertainment by 15% and 19%
respectively
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic 5. The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
232 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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