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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). v.2

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). v. 2
The table compares the number of people who travel overseas in the year of 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. The areas are grouped into Africa, America, Asia and pecific, Europe and Middle East. The total number increased rapidly from 448. 9 million in 1990 to 615. 2 million in 1995, followed by moderate growth in the next decade and reached 693. 7 million in the year of 2005. African oversea tourists showed a steady increase from 18. 2 million in 1990 to 28. 7 million in 2005. On the contrast, American international travelers boomed from 80. 5 million in 1990 to 112. 5 million in 1995, followed by a slightly increase to 118. 2 million in 2000 and dipped to 113. 2 million in the year of 2005. The number of international visitor from Asia and the pecific raised steady from 60. 2 million in 1990 to 135. 8 million in 2005. Europian visitors increased drastly from 280. 2 million in 1990 to 390. 3 million in 1995, showed a slowly increase in the next ten years and reached 400. 2 million in the year of 2005. Middle East international travelers burgeoned slowly from 9. 8 million in 1990 to 15. 8 million in 2005. By comparison, Europian visitors comprised the biggest section of the total international travelers. Africa, Asia and the pacific and Middle East generated steady growth in the number of visitor from 1990 to 2005 whereas America manifest a up and down in the two decades.
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of 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. The areas
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, Europe and Middle East.

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in 1990 to 615. 2
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in 1995, followed by moderate growth in the
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in the
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of 2005. African oversea tourists
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a steady increase from 18. 2
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in 1990 to 28. 7
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in 2005. On the contrast, American
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travelers boomed from 80. 5
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in 1990 to 112. 5
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in 1995, followed by a
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to 118. 2
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in 2000 and dipped to 113. 2
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in the
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The
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from Asia and the
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raised steady from 60. 2
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in 1990 to 135. 8
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Europian
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increased
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in 1990 to 390. 3
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ten years and reached 400. 2
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in the
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of 2005. Middle East
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travelers burgeoned
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in 1990 to 15. 8
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By comparison,
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comprised the biggest section of the total
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travelers. Africa, Asia and the pacific and Middle East generated steady growth in the
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of
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from 1990 to 2005 whereas America manifest
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up and down in the two decades.
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