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The chat below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2016, and future projection of 2025. v.2

The chat below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2016, and future projection of 2025. v. 2
The chart presents changes in the amount of money in three sector exports, namely International tourism, Dairy products and Meat products in Southland between 2000 and 2016, and future expectation for 2025. With ragards to International tourism and Dairy products, there were an upward trend of value of exports over the period shown. At the start of the period, with 8 billion was got from International tourism export. This figure increased gradualy to around 9 billion in 16 years later and it is predicted that International tourism will export around 10 billion in 2025. 7 billion was got by exporting Dairy products in 2000. This rate experienced a sharp grew to around 10 billion in 2016 to become the highest of all. Dairy products are expected to export 9. 5 billion in the next 9 years. When it comes to Meat products, standing at much lower position, at around 6 billion in 2000. This rate was a slight decrease to 5. 5 billion in 2016 and it is projected that Meat products will continue go down to 5 billion in 2025 to become the lowest of all.
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in Southland between 2000 and 2016, and future expectation for 2025.

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, there were an upward trend of value of
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over the period shown. At the
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. This figure increased
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in 2000. This rate experienced a sharp grew to
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in 2025 to become the lowest of all.
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IELTS academic The chat below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2016, and future projection of 2025. v. 2

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