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The graph describes the changes in water supply and sanitation in urban and rural areas between 1980 and 1990. v.2

The graph describes the changes in water supply and sanitation in urban and rural areas between 1980 and 1990. v. 2
The Colum chart illustrates the proportion of water supply and sanitation between urban and rural areas in 1980 and 1990. The survey was conducted by the United Nations. Overall, it is clear that the category of both water supply and sanitation experienced a growing trend from 1980 to 1990, and the proportion of water supply in urban areas was higher than the one in rural areas. To begin with, 70% was recorded in the water supply of urban areas in 1980, it went up 1% in 1990. The change in the water supply of rural area was dramatical, climbing from 28% in 1980 to 45% in 1990. Turning to the figure for sanitation. 59% was depicted in urban areas in 1980, in the ensuing decade, it only increased by 2%. As for sanitation in rural areas, the figure was much lower in 1980 and 1990, with 13% and 14% respectively.
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between
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in 1980 and 1990. The survey
was conducted
by the United Nations.

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, it is
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clear
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water
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supply
and
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sanitation
experienced a growing trend from 1980 to 1990, and the proportion of
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water
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supply
in
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urban
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areas
was higher than the one in
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rural
areas.

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was recorded
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water
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supply
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urban
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areas
in 1980, it went up 1% in 1990. The
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dramatical
, climbing from 28% in 1980 to 45% in 1990.

Turning to the figure for
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sanitation
. 59%
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urban
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areas
in 1980, in the ensuing decade, it
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only
increased by 2%. As for
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sanitation
in
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rural
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areas
, the figure was much lower in 1980 and 1990, with 13% and 14%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph describes the changes in water supply and sanitation in urban and rural areas between 1980 and 1990. v. 2

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150 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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