The table demonstrated the changes in the number of people traveled abroad between 1990 to 2005.
In the first year, it can be seen from the diagram that the European were the most enjoy traveling people among other cohorts, came top with 280. 2 million one which far more than other areas. Meanwhile, Americans and people from Asia and the Pacific region took up the far second and the third place respectively. Besides, the African followed by 18. 2 million people which were a double for the one in middle east areas.
As we can easily notice that the number of Europe constantly increased and always more than the number of other areas, ended up with 400 million. The figure for the rest areas except America both showed the same trend with Europe’s, while American figure went through a slight diminish in the last five years though it increased in the first decade. Therefore, the rank of America had fallen to the third place and was exceeded by Asia and the Pacific.
In brief, the total number of people who traveled globally significantly increased, from 448. 9 million to 693. 7 million.
The table demonstrated the
changes
in the
number
of
people
traveled abroad
between 1990 to 2005
.
In the
first
year, it can be
seen
from the diagram that the European were the most enjoy traveling
people
among other cohorts, came top with 280. 2
million
one which far more than other areas. Meanwhile, Americans and
people
from Asia and the Pacific region took up the far second and the third place
respectively
.
Besides
, the African followed by 18. 2
million
people
which were a double for the one in
middle east
areas.
As we can
easily
notice that the
number
of Europe
constantly
increased and always more than the
number
of other areas, ended up with 400
million
. The figure for the rest areas except America both
showed
the same trend with Europe’s, while American figure went through a slight diminish in the last five years though it increased in the
first
decade.
Therefore
, the rank of America had fallen to the third place and
was exceeded
by Asia and the Pacific.
In brief
, the total
number
of
people
who traveled globally
significantly
increased, from 448. 9
million
to 693. 7
million
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes