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The table below shows the population of three cities in 1990, the population forecast of 2000 and the actual of 2000. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant. v.2

The table below shows the population of three cities in 1990, the population forecast of 2000 and the actual of 2000.
The given table depicts the actual population among Sao Paulo, Jakarta, and Shanghai cities in 1990 and 2000. The data is calibrated in million. The most striking feature to be observed is that Sao Paulo city contain more population between 1990 and 2000. It can be vividly seen that, in 1990, Sao Paulo led with highest 15 million whereas Shanghai, Jakarta occupied second and third position with 13. 5 and 9. 5 million. It was predicted that in 2000, the population of Sao Paulo city would increased significantly and reach 24 million. Turning to rest of description, the actual population of Sao Paulo in 2000 was 18 million which was 6 million lesser than the prediction. The population of Shanghai was expected to increase and become 17 million. Surprisingly, it was decreased and by the end of decade it was 12. 5 million. The population of jakarta was expected to rise 4. 5 but it elevated sharply with 17. 5 million in 2000. As far as comparison is concerned, the population of Jakarta was decreased in 2000 while other two cities population upsurged noticeably.
The
given
table depicts the actual
population
among
Sao Paulo
, Jakarta, and Shanghai
cities
in 1990 and 2000. The data
is calibrated
in
million
.

The
most striking feature to
be observed
is that
Sao Paulo
city contain more
population
between 1990 and 2000.

It can be
vividly
seen
that, in 1990,
Sao Paulo
led with highest 15
million
whereas Shanghai, Jakarta occupied second and third position with 13. 5 and 9. 5
million
. It
was predicted
that in 2000, the
population
of
Sao Paulo
city would
increased
significantly
and reach 24 million.

Turning to rest of description, the actual
population
of
Sao Paulo
in 2000 was 18
million
which was 6
million
lesser than the prediction. The
population
of Shanghai was
expected
to increase and become 17
million
.
Surprisingly
, it
was decreased
and by the
end
of decade it was 12. 5
million
. The
population
of
jakarta
was
expected
to rise 4. 5
but
it elevated
sharply
with 17. 5
million
in 2000. As far as comparison
is concerned
, the
population
of Jakarta
was decreased
in 2000 while other two
cities
population
upsurged
noticeably
.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below shows the population of three cities in 1990, the population forecast of 2000 and the actual of 2000.

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