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The table chart given the information that Australia family spend the monthly income on household products in two years. v.2

The table chart given the information that Australia family spend the monthly income on household products in two years. v. 2
The tabular chart illustrates the information about that the compare of how many Australia family like to monthly income spend on six different household items from 1991 to 2001. A quick look on graph is enough to make it clear that the household product of food more popular in Australian family more than monthly income spend on this item as compared to others products. To commence with, in 1991, the people of Australia not more prefer monthly wages on transport and clothing at, $70 and $30. While, after a decade ago the figure had one time decreased just at $45 and $20, respectively. However, among three household products as food, electricity and water and housing and represented to climbed and the number of Australia families had more fascinated the spend the monthly income on this three products and reached at(160, 120 and 100 dollars), whereas the figure for electricity and water had dramatically changed. Finally, others good services in native of Australian more statistical expenditure a monthly income on this item from $250 in 1991 and $270 in 2001.
The tabular chart illustrates the information about that the compare of how
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Australia family like to
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monthly
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income
spend on six
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different
household items from 1991 to 2001.

A quick look on graph is
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enough
to
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make
it
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clear
that the household product of food more popular in Australian family more than
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monthly
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income
spend on this item as compared to others products.

To commence with, in 1991, the
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people
of Australia not more prefer
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monthly
wages on transport and clothing at, $70 and $30. While, after a decade ago the figure had one time decreased
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just
at $45 and $20,
respectively
.

However
, among three household products as food, electricity and water and housing and represented to climbed and the number of Australia families had more fascinated the spend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
monthly
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income
on this three products and reached at(160, 120 and 100 dollars), whereas the figure for electricity and water had
dramatically
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changed
.
Finally
, others
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good
services in native of Australian more statistical expenditure a
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monthly
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income
on this item from $250 in 1991 and $270 in 2001.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table chart given the information that Australia family spend the monthly income on household products in two years. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
179 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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