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The charts below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country. v.1

The charts below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country. v. 1
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of household expenditure by two income groups in Europe. In general, it is clear that house rent is not included in the two pie charts. First of all, the low-income group spends the most money on food and drink which accounted for 29% of the total income, while the high-income group spends only 15%. It is clearly shown that high-income earner spends the majority of the income on miscellaneous items (23%) whereas only 18% allocated them for the low-income earner. Those who earn less money spend more money on fuel bills than the high-income group (24% and 7% respectively). A direct link can be seen between money spent on transport and fuel bills, that is transport makes up a smaller proportion in the low-income group than high-income group (9% for the former and 16% for the latter). Another interesting feature is that the low-income earners spend less money on recreational and cultural activities compared to the high-income group, with figures 11% and 21% respectively). For both the income groups, less money is spent on restaurant and hotel and clothing, that is 4% and 5% for low-income group and 7% and 8% for the high-income group.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of household expenditure by two
income
groups
in Europe.
In general
, it is
clear
that
house
rent is not included in the two pie charts.

First of all
, the low-income
group
spends
the most
money
on food and drink which accounted for 29% of the total
income
, while the
high-income
group
spends
only
15%. It is
clearly
shown that
high-income
earner
spends
the majority of the
income
on miscellaneous items (23%) whereas
only
18% allocated them for the low-income earner. Those who earn less
money
spend
more
money
on fuel bills than the
high-income
group
(24% and 7%
respectively
). A direct link can be
seen
between
money
spent on transport and fuel bills,
that is
transport
makes
up a smaller proportion in the low-income
group
than
high-income
group
(9% for the former and 16% for the latter).

Another interesting feature is that the low-income earners
spend
less
money
on recreational and cultural activities compared to the
high-income
group
, with figures 11% and 21%
respectively
)
. For both the
income
groups
, less
money
is spent
on restaurant and hotel and clothing,
that is
4% and 5% for low-income
group
and 7% and 8% for the
high-income
group
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country. v. 1

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