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The table below shows the world’s ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The table below shows the world’s ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.
The table illustrates the list of countries with highest petrol expenses. The main contrasting feature is the outstandingly low values of average monthly disposable income of Turkey and Eritrea. It corresponds to their high percentage of monthly income spent on petrol, with 34 and 61 percent respectively. However, average monthly petrol expenditure of Eritrea is 275 dollars, same as Sweedish values but Turkey petrol expenses reach a second highest value in the list with 316 dollars a months, which is just below Norway woth 320 dollars a month. On the other hand, countries like Sweeden, Norway or Denmark have remarkably low percentage of monthly income spent on petrol, that results in high values of monthly disposable income, However, average monthly petrol expenditure does not follow this trend. To conclude, percentage of monthly income spent on petrol corelates with average monthly disposable income in all countries but now with average petrol expenditure.
The table illustrates the list of countries with
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highest
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petrol
expenses.

The main contrasting feature is the
outstandingly
low values of
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average
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monthly
disposable
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income
of Turkey and Eritrea. It corresponds to their high percentage of
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monthly
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income
spent on
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petrol
, with 34 and 61 percent
respectively
.
However
,
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average
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monthly
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petrol
expenditure of Eritrea is 275 dollars, same as
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Sweedish
values
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but
Turkey
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petrol
expenses reach a second highest
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value
in the list with 316 dollars
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a months
, which is
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just
below Norway
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woth
320 dollars a month.

On the other hand
, countries like
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Sweeden
, Norway or Denmark have
remarkably
low percentage of
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monthly
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income
spent on
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petrol
, that results in high values of
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monthly
disposable
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income
,
However
,
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average
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monthly
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petrol
expenditure does not follow this trend.

To conclude
, percentage of
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monthly
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income
spent on
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petrol
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corelates
with
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average
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monthly
disposable
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income
in all countries
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but
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now
with
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average
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petrol
expenditure.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below shows the world’s ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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