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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend in petrol. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.1

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend in petrol.
The graph depicts, the information about the use of petrol in total number of people in UK and US and the people who are classified into poorest, middle and richest income respectively. In a bird' s view, the largest amount of money spend on petrol for poorest income people. With reference to United States of America, being the poorest income people spend on petrol is more than the richest income level people. In case of both countries of middle income people spend on petrol witnessed as average level at about (2. 8%-5%). Subsequently, US recorded as richest income people consumed very less quantity of petrol. Then UK recorded as very least for poorest income people highest consumption in middle income people. In terms of, the largest consumption of petrol considered as America for poorest income people at about 5. 3%. In case of, UK the poorest income people experienced as least amount of petrol consumption but the highest for richest income people. Consequently, US enjoys at highest rate in former but latter it is lowest rate spend on petrol. Having decoded the data, the middle income level people are reported for medium level of spend on petrol for both nations. Whilst, the UK considered as less amount spend on petrol compared to USA.
The graph depicts, the information about the
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income
respectively
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poorest
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With reference
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poorest
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income
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people
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spend
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petrol
is more than the
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richest
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income
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level
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people
. In case of both countries of
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middle
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income
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people
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spend
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petrol
witnessed as average
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at about (2. 8%-5%).
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, US recorded as
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people
consumed
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less quantity of
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petrol
. Then UK recorded as
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least for
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income
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people
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highest
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. In terms of, the largest consumption of
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petrol
considered as America for
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poorest
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income
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at about 5. 3%.

In case of, UK the
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people
experienced as
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consumption
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income
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.
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latter it is
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Having decoded the data, the
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middle
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level
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are reported
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for both nations. Whilst, the UK considered as less amount
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compared
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to USA
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57Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend in petrol.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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