the table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in official building on a typical weekday v.2
the table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in official building on a typical weekday v. 2
the table illustrates the coffee shop on a typical weekday in four times around 07: 30 PM to 08: 30 AM. it is evident coffee was the best order in the morning which is 265 customers on average has at least 150 more higher than tea, and pastries was 275 in the morning more than quarter from sandwich. 10: 30 to 02: 30 is also ahead in customers value, with 185 order coffee and 200 sandwich.
On the afternoon, however, coffee as drink are almost equal value with pastries as food higher than tea and sandwich. meanwhile, in the evening coffee was 200, almost half than tea which is only 75 and sandwich was 110 higher 90 than pastries.
overall, it is clear that the coffee in shop most popular than tea on a weekday, especially for breakfast and dinner. On the other hand, pastries was higher than sandwich for breakfast and lunch, sandwich only poplar in the afternoon.
the
table illustrates the
coffee
shop on a typical weekday in four times around 07: 30 PM to 08: 30 AM. it is evident
coffee
was the best order in the morning which is 265 customers on average has at least 150 more higher than
tea
, and pastries was 275 in the morning more than quarter from sandwich. 10: 30 to 02: 30 is
also
ahead in customers value, with 185 order
coffee
and 200
sandwich
.
On the afternoon
,
however
,
coffee
as drink are almost equal value with pastries as food higher than
tea
and sandwich.
meanwhile
, in the evening
coffee
was 200, almost half than
tea
which is
only
75 and sandwich was 110 higher 90 than pastries.
overall
, it is
clear
that the
coffee
in shop most
popular
than
tea
on a weekday,
especially
for breakfast and dinner.
On the other hand
, pastries was higher than sandwich for breakfast and lunch, sandwich
only
poplar in the afternoon.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes