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The diagrams below show how an area called Meadowside developed from a village into a suburb of the city of Fonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The diagrams below show how an area called Meadowside developed from a village into a suburb of the city of Fonton.
The map illustrates the transformation of Meadowside from a pristine village to a suburb of Fonton. Overall, Meadowside has undergone drastic changes over the period before it becomes a part of the city of Fonton. The connection of the two islands and infrastructural developments are noticeable. In 1962, Fonton and Meadowside were two different villages which can be travelled by road or train separately. However, more than 20 years after, a road was constructed from the southeast of Fonton all the way to the southwest of Meadowside. The railway system of Fonton remained while; road widening took place to the old road of the village. In addition, the old village of Meadowside was expanded giving way to housing space and superstore at the southern tip. A leisure complex was erected at the northern part near the road. At the present, further improvements take place. The two areas are now connected by land mass where the transport station is constructed in the middle which is the upper side of the road and behind is a hotel. On the other side, a business park is build.
The map illustrates the transformation of
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Meadowside
from a pristine
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village
to a suburb of
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Fonton
.

Overall
,
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Meadowside
has undergone drastic
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changes
over the period
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before
it becomes a part of the city of
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Fonton
. The connection of the two islands and infrastructural developments are noticeable.

In 1962,
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Fonton
and
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Meadowside
were two
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different
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villages
which can
be travelled
by
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road
or train
separately
.
However
, more than 20 years after, a
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road
was constructed
from the southeast of
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Fonton
all the way to the southwest of
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Meadowside
. The railway system of
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Fonton
remained while;
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road
widening took place to the
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old
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road
of the
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village
.
In addition
, the
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old
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village
of
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Meadowside
was expanded
giving way to housing space and superstore at the southern tip. A leisure complex
was erected
at the northern part near the road.

At the present,
further
improvements take place. The two areas are
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now
connected by land mass where the transport station
is constructed
in the middle which is the upper side of the
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road
and behind is a hotel. On the other side, a business park is build.
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9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show how an area called Meadowside developed from a village into a suburb of the city of Fonton.

Academic
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4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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