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The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. v.4

The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. v. 4
The provided table displays the number of sales in a coffee shop, which is located in an office building. Information is categorized for 4 different items and 4 different 3-hour periods in the day. Overall, the best selling product in the shop is coffee. Coffee, along with tea and pastries, has the largest sales from 7. 30 to 10. 30 in the morning; while people prefer to buy sandwiches in lunchtime. In detail, about 800 cups of coffee are sold in a typical weekday, with a third (265) just in the first 3 hours. Sales of tea and pastries, at the same time, are 110 and 275, respectively. Additionally, it can be seen that people gradually buy less coffee and tea in lunchtime and even less between 2. 30 and 5. 30. However, the figures increase by the late evening to become 200 for coffee and 75 for tea. Sales of pastries decrease to just over one-third (95) between 10. 30 and 2. 30 after a flying start and finish the day with the number 80. Regarding sandwiches, sales in lunchtime (200) and late evening (110) are significantly larger than those of early morning (50) and afternoon (40).
The provided table displays the number of
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sales
in a
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coffee
shop, which
is located
in an office building. Information
is categorized
for 4
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different
items and 4
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different
3-hour periods in the day.

Overall
, the
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best selling
product in the shop is
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coffee
.
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Coffee
, along with
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tea
and pastries, has the largest
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sales
from 7. 30 to 10. 30 in the morning; while
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people
prefer to
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buy
sandwiches in lunchtime.

In detail, about
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800 cups
of
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coffee
are sold
in a typical weekday, with a third (265)
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just
in the
first
3 hours.
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Sales
of
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tea
and pastries, at the same time, are 110 and 275,
respectively
.
Additionally
, it can be
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seen
that
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people
gradually
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buy
less
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coffee
and
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tea
in lunchtime and even less between 2. 30 and 5. 30.
However
, the figures increase by the late evening to become 200 for
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coffee
and 75 for
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tea
.
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Sales
of pastries decrease to
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just
over one-third (95) between 10. 30 and 2. 30 after a flying
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start
and finish the day with the number 80. Regarding sandwiches,
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sales
in lunchtime (200) and late evening (110) are
significantly
larger than those of early morning (50) and afternoon (40).
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15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. v. 4

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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