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The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. v.5

The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. v. 5
The supplied table lists vending made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical workday. In general, consumers prefer coffee to tea throughout the day. Meanwhile, for snacks, both pastries and sandwiches sales show a fluctuation. Looking at the details, the coffee requisition is preferable to people. It counts 265 sales in the morning around 7. 30-10. 30 am and 200 sales by the end of the day as 5. 30-8. 30. Despite the number of coffee demanding levels down, the figure is still higher than tea consumption on the same day. Tea sales almost halved coffee sales in the morning, only 110 and pertain 75 sales at 5. 30 – 8. 30 pm, approximately 3 times lower than coffee vending at the same time. Coffee and teas are preferred by people earlier in the morning and in the evening time. In the case of snack preference, pastries are true as the favourable snack in the morning. It is about 275 sales, almost 5 times higher than sandwiches which are only sold 50 pieces at the moment. The sale of pastries fluctuates modestly during the rest of the day and it is only 80 at 5. 30-8. 30. In contrast, more sandwiches are sold at the end of the day. It is calculated 100 sales, about double higher than in the morning retail.
The supplied table lists vending made by a
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coffee
shop in an office building on a typical workday.
In general
, consumers prefer
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coffee
to
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tea
throughout the day. Meanwhile, for snacks, both pastries and sandwiches
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sales
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show
a fluctuation.

Looking at the
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details
, the
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coffee
requisition is preferable to
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people
. It counts 265
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sales
in the
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morning
around 7. 30-10. 30 am and 200
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sales
by the
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end
of the day as 5. 30-8. 30. Despite the number of
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coffee
demanding levels down, the figure is
still
higher than
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tea
consumption on the same day.
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Tea
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sales
almost halved
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coffee
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sales
in the
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morning
,
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only
110 and pertain 75
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sales
at 5. 30 – 8. 30 pm, approximately 3 times lower than
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coffee
vending at the same time.
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Coffee
and
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teas
are preferred
by
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people
earlier in the
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morning
and in the evening time.

In the case of snack preference, pastries are true as the
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favourable
snack in the
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morning
. It is about 275
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sales
, almost 5 times higher than sandwiches which are
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only
sold 50 pieces at the moment. The
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sale
of pastries fluctuates
modestly
during the rest of the day and it is
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only
80 at 5. 30-8. 30.
In contrast
, more sandwiches
are sold
at the
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end
of the day. It
is calculated
100
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sales
, about double higher than in the
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morning
retail.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. v. 5

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
226 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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