The table shows a typical weekday’s sales of a coffee shop which is located in an office building. It is clear that people purchase more coffee and tea from this restaurant in the morning and evening while they opt for sandwiches during the lunchtime.
Analysing the coffee shop’s sales report reveals that people purchase 265 cups of coffee and 110 cups of tea in the early morning and 200 cups of coffee and 75 cups of tea in the evening from this coffee shop. In the noontime, the number of sandwich sales quadruples than that in the early morning. The sales of this item in the evening is also far higher than of the 2. 30 to 5. 30 pm. Tea sale is highest in the morning, 110 cups, while the coffee sale is high both in the morning and in the evening. Pastries are sold more in the breakfast time amounting 275 which is more than thrice than the sales in the evening. Finally, people purchase 50 pieces of sandwiches in the early morning and the highest sales could be observed later in the morning till the lunchtime. The sale of sandwiches drops in the later parts of the day.
The table
shows
a typical weekday’s
sales
of a
coffee
shop which
is located
in an office building. It is
clear
that
people
purchase
more
coffee
and
tea
from this restaurant in the
morning
and evening while they opt for sandwiches during the lunchtime.
Analysing
the
coffee
shop’s
sales
report reveals that
people
purchase
265
cups
of
coffee
and 110
cups
of
tea
in the early
morning
and 200
cups
of
coffee
and 75
cups
of
tea
in the evening from this
coffee
shop. In the noontime, the number of sandwich
sales
quadruples than that in the early
morning
. The
sales
of this item in the evening is
also
far higher than of the 2. 30 to 5. 30 pm.
Tea
sale
is highest in the
morning
, 110
cups
, while the
coffee
sale
is high both in the
morning
and in the evening. Pastries
are sold
more in the breakfast time amounting 275 which is more than thrice than the
sales
in the evening.
Finally
,
people
purchase
50 pieces of sandwiches in the early
morning
and the highest
sales
could
be observed
later in the
morning
till the lunchtime. The
sale
of sandwiches drops in the later parts of the day.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes