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The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first years as the projects are set v.3

The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first years as the projects are set v. 3
The table indicates the estimated cost over the next five years sustainable foresting for three projects in West Africa, Central America, and South-est Asia while the pie chart illustrates the anticipated expenditure breakdown allocation for the first year of the projects. The units which were used are the American dollar and the percentage (%) in the table and the chart respectively. It can be seen from the table that the estimated cost of the West Africa project in the first year is 10, 5 million dollars, almost half of the projected cost for Central America and about one-third of that of the Asian project. It is predicted that West Africa will spend less money in the following years than in the Year 1, falling to 3, 5 million in the last year of the period. Besides, the prediction for Central America shows a similar pattern as in West Africa. In the last three years of the period, the expected cost is 5 million which is about four times lower than that of Year 1. Strikingly, only in Central America does the stable in the price is set in these three years. In contrast, although dropping to 20 million dollars in Year 2, the cost for south-est Asian project is forecast climb to 50 million dollars in Year 5. Regarding the pie chart, half of the projected cost will cover salaries while 20% will be shared equally in training and office expense. The rest of the expected cost will be spent on set-up costs. To sum up, while South-est Asian project is anticipated as the highest projected cost for the environmental plan for the next five years, almost funding in the first year is estimated spending on salaries.
The table indicates the estimated
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cost
over the
next
five years sustainable foresting for three
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projects
in West Africa,
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Central
America, and South-est Asia while the pie chart illustrates the anticipated expenditure breakdown allocation for the
first
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year
of the
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projects
. The units which were
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used
are the American
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dollar
and the percentage (%) in the table and the chart
respectively
.

It can be
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seen
from the table that the estimated
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cost
of the West Africa
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project
in the
first
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year
is 10, 5
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million
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dollars
, almost half of the projected
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cost
for
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Central
America and about one-third of that of the Asian
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project
. It
is predicted
that West Africa will spend less money in the following years than in the
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Year
1, falling to 3, 5
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million
in the last
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year
of the period.
Besides
, the prediction for
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Central
America
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shows
a similar pattern as in West Africa. In the last three years of the period, the
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expected
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cost
is 5
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million
which is about four times lower than that of
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Year
1.
Strikingly
,
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only
in
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Central
America does the stable in the price
is set
in these three years.
In contrast
, although dropping to 20
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million
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dollars
in
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Year
2, the
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cost
for south-est Asian
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project
is forecast climb to 50
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million
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dollars
in
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Year
5.

Regarding the pie chart, half of the projected
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cost
will cover salaries while 20% will
be shared
equally
in training and office expense. The rest of the
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expected
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cost
will
be spent
on set-up costs.

To sum up, while South-est Asian
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project
is anticipated
as the highest projected
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cost
for the environmental plan for the
next
five years, almost funding in the
first
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year
is estimated
spending on salaries.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the projected costings over the next five years in American dollars for three environmental projects sustainable forestry. The pie chart shows the expected expenditure breakdown allocation for the first years as the projects are set v. 3

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