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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990 2000 and 2010 v.3

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990 2000 and 2010 v. 3
The provided table gives information regarding amount of milk produced yearly in four nations during 1990, 2000 and 2010. Overall, it is clear from the chart that Netherlands amongst the all countries recorded as highest producer of milk while, the production of milk was observed in the Guatemala. As can be seen that, in the 1990, 11, 262, 000 litres of milk production was noticed in the Netherlands, which decreased significantly in the middle year and in 2000 it produced 11, 466, 000 liters of milk. Similarly, milk production in Australia was 11, 246, 000 liters and saw a dramatic drop in the following years. It was 11, 105, 000 in 2000 and 9, 165, 000 in the 2010 respectively. In contrast, Tanzania and Guatemala showed the upward trend in the production of milk. Tanzania accounted for 87, 000 litres then inclined sharply and reached at 1, 55, 000 in the 2010. However, number of litres produced in Guatemala was 26, 000, it recorded almost doubled in 2000. Finally in 2010, Guatemala produced 84, 000 litres of milk.
The provided table gives information regarding amount of
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yearly in four nations during 1990, 2000 and 2010.

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, it is
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clear
from the chart that Netherlands amongst the all countries recorded as
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producer of
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milk
while, the
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production
of
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milk
was observed
in the Guatemala.

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seen
that, in the 1990, 11, 262, 000
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litres
of
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milk
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production
was noticed
in the Netherlands, which decreased
significantly
in the middle year and in 2000 it
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produced
11, 466, 000 liters of
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milk
.
Similarly
,
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milk
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production
in Australia was 11, 246, 000 liters and
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saw
a dramatic drop in the following years. It was 11, 105, 000 in 2000 and 9, 165, 000 in the 2010
respectively
.

In contrast
, Tanzania and Guatemala
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showed
the upward trend in the
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production
of
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milk
. Tanzania accounted for 87, 000
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litres
then inclined
sharply
and reached at 1, 55, 000 in the 2010.
However
, number of
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litres
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produced
in Guatemala was 26, 000, it recorded almost doubled in 2000.
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Finally
in 2010, Guatemala
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produced
84, 000
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litres
of
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milk
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990 2000 and 2010 v. 3

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6.0
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