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The table below gives information of weekly level of consumption by different age groups in ordinary milk and butter healthy alternative HA milk and butter in one European country Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and v.2

The table below gives information of weekly level of consumption by different age groups in ordinary milk and butter healthy alternative HA milk and butter in one European country
The graph displays the volume of milk, butter healthy alternative milk and butter that different age groups of people consume every week in a European country. It seems people who aged 26 to 45 and 65 or higher tend to consume more healthy milk than other age. Apparently, according to graph, the weekly consumption of milk raise with the age raise. Youngsters who age 25 or under drink milk 1200ml every week and around 60% of them prefer full fat milk. There is a slight growth on milk consumption for people who age 26 to 45 and 45 to 65, which increase from 1650ml to 1670ml. But obviously, the younger group pay attention to health, and 80% prefer low fat milk, on contrary the figure for older group is 55%. Older people drink more milk than other age group, which is 1900ml every week. For butter consumption, people who age 45 to 65 consume 60g butter weekly, which is the highest one in all age groups.
The graph displays the volume of
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consume every week in a European country. It seems
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aged 26 to 45 and 65 or higher tend to consume more healthy
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raise with the
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raise. Youngsters
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25 or under drink
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1200ml every week and around 60% of them prefer full
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. There is a slight growth on
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consumption for
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26 to 45 and 45 to 65, which increase from 1650ml to 1670ml.
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pay attention to health, and 80% prefer low
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, on contrary the figure for older
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drink more
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, which is 1900ml every week.

For
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45 to 65 consume 60g
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weekly, which is the highest one in all
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IELTS academic The table below gives information of weekly level of consumption by different age groups in ordinary milk and butter healthy alternative HA milk and butter in one European country

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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