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The chart below shows the percentage of fatal accidents by locations in a European country. The survey was conducted in 2000. v.2

The chart below shows the percentage of fatal accidents by locations in a European country. The survey was conducted in 2000. v. 2
The provided bar graph gives information about the proportion of fatal crashes by rural and urban in a European country with speed limit in 2000 Overall, it is clear that maximum accidents noticed by the urban with low-speed limit, while, rural faced more crashes by the high-speed. As can be seen from the graph that above 70% accidents observed by the urban at 30 mph or less speed limit, in contrast, rural accounted for 22% at the same speed limit. However, fatal crashes decreased with the increasing speed limit by the urban while, rural fatal accidents went up sharply with the high-speed limit. At the speed limit 45-50 mph, a little difference noticed between rural and urban accidents, 51% and 49% respectively. Moreover, fatal crashes of rural reached at the top at above 80% at the 55 mph speed limit where, below 20% crashes had been noticed by the urban. Interestingly, at the 60 mph or higher speed limit, accidents of urban inclined while a drop was seen by rural.
The provided bar graph gives information about the proportion of
fatal
crashes
by
rural
and
urban
in a European country with
speed
limit
in 2000

Overall
, it is
clear
that maximum
accidents
noticed by the
urban
with low-speed
limit
, while,
rural
faced more
crashes
by the high-speed.

As can be
seen
from the graph that above 70%
accidents
observed by the
urban
at
30 mph
or less
speed
limit
,
in contrast
,
rural
accounted for 22% at the same
speed
limit
.
However
,
fatal
crashes
decreased with the increasing
speed
limit
by the
urban
while,
rural
fatal
accidents
went up
sharply
with the high-speed limit.

At the
speed
limit
45
-50 mph
, a
little
difference noticed between
rural
and
urban
accidents
, 51% and 49%
respectively
.
Moreover
,
fatal
crashes
of
rural
reached at the top at above 80% at the
55 mph
speed
limit
where, below 20%
crashes
had
been noticed
by the
urban
.
Interestingly
, at the
60 mph
or higher
speed
limit
,
accidents
of
urban
inclined while a drop was
seen
by
rural
.
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