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The table below shows the percentage of main types of dewlling in victoria, the Northern Terriory and Tasmania. Summerize the information be selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant. v.2

The table below shows the percentage of main types of dewlling in victoria, the Northern Terriory and Tasmania.
The drawing compares how people live in different types of houses in three particular states of Australia (Victoria, Northern Territory and Tasmania) between 2001 and 2006. Overall, most Australian prefer to live in houses which remained stably the highest percentage throughout the period. As can be seen from the table, the number of people, who choose to live in house in Tasmania, accounted the highest percentage at around 89 percent over 6 years of the period that were higher than in The Northern Territory by approximately a quarter (65 percent and 63 percent, respectively). Moreover, the choices of semi-attached house was the most common in the Northern Territory at about 14 percent during the period; conversely, the opposite was true in Tasmania which just reported at 3 percent in 2001 and 4 percent in 2006. Turning to the data of people who lived in flat/apartment, there was a similar trend at approximately 9 percent throughout the recorded period between Victoria and Territory. Meanwhile, some people enjoyed to live in other types which was described at 14 and 11 percent, respectively, from the first year to the last year of the period.
The drawing compares how
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people
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live
in
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different
types of
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houses
in three particular states of Australia (Victoria, Northern
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Territory
and Tasmania) between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
, most Australian prefer to
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live
in
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houses
which remained
stably
the highest percentage throughout the period.

As can be
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seen
from the table, the number of
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people
, who choose to
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live
in
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house
in Tasmania, accounted the highest percentage at around 89
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percent
over 6 years of the
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period
that were higher than in The Northern
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Territory
by approximately a quarter (65
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percent
and 63
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percent
,
respectively
).
Moreover
, the choices of semi-attached
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house
was the most common in the Northern
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Territory
at about 14
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percent
during the
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period
;
conversely
, the opposite was true in Tasmania which
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just
reported at 3
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percent
in 2001 and 4
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percent
in 2006.

Turning to the data of
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people
who
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lived
in flat/apartment, there was a similar trend at approximately 9
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percent
throughout the recorded
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period
between Victoria and
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Territory
. Meanwhile,
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some
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people
enjoyed to
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live
in other types which was
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described
at 14 and 11
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percent
,
respectively
, from the
first
year to the last year of the
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period
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage of main types of dewlling in victoria, the Northern Terriory and Tasmania.

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3 paragraphs
191 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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