The pie chart compares the percentage of commuters using for different types of transport in an European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
It is clear that most people drove their cars to move around the city in 2000. Overall, those of foot and bike fell sharply compared to a significant increase in the data of car and some constant oscillation in the figure for bus over the period shown.
In 1960, the percentage of people going on foot to and from work was highest, at just under 30%, followed by that of bike, with approximately 25%. In comparison about 16% was the proportion of bus users, yet the data of car was exponentially lower, merely 5%.
The year 2000 witnessed a soar in the figure for car, to just over 35%, making car the most used mean of transport while there was a dramatically drop and a plummet in those of bike and foot, to about 5% and 7% respectively. In contrast, after reaching a peak at just over 25%, the proportion of people travelling by bus decreased moderately to roughly 4%.
The pie chart compares the percentage of commuters using for
different
types of transport in
an
European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
It is
clear
that most
people
drove their
cars
to
move
around the city in 2000.
Overall
, those of foot and bike fell
sharply
compared to a significant increase in the data of
car
and
some
constant oscillation in the figure for bus over the period shown.
In 1960, the percentage of
people
going on foot to and from work was highest, at
just
under 30%, followed by that of bike, with approximately 25%. In
comparison
about 16% was the proportion of bus users,
yet
the data of
car
was
exponentially
lower,
merely
5%.
The year 2000 witnessed a soar in the figure for
car
, to
just
over 35%, making
car
the most
used
mean of transport while there was a
dramatically drop
and a plummet in those of bike and foot, to about 5% and 7%
respectively
.
In contrast
, after reaching a peak at
just
over 25%, the proportion of
people
travelling by bus decreased
moderately
to roughly 4%.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes