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the table below shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in Victoria, the Northern Territory, and Tasmania. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant v.2

the table below shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in Victoria, the Northern Territory, and Tasmania.
The table illustrates the proportion of major types of accommodations in Victoria, the Northern Territory and Tasmania. Overall, The prior dwelling in these 3 areas was house both in 2001 and 2006. However, only Tasmania was the area that the house became more popular after 5 years. Looking at the house, The data for choosing house in victoria was the highest with 79 percent in the year 2001 which was nearly 80 times higher than that of other. The figures for semi-attached house and flat were similar with 11 and 9 percent respectively. After 5 years, whereas this area saw a decline by 3 percent in the data for house, a rise of 1 percent for semi-attached house, flat and other was witnessed. To nothern territory, this location experienced a highest upward trend by 12 percent for other and a downward trend by 2 percent for house. Over 5-year period, compared to other locations, only the figure for house in Tasmania rose by 1 percent. While this place witnessed a fell by 1 percent in other, the percentages of semi-attached house and flat grew 1 percent.
The table illustrates the proportion of major types of accommodations in Victoria, the Northern Territory and Tasmania.

Overall
, The prior dwelling in these 3 areas was
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house
both in 2001 and 2006.
However
,
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Tasmania was the area that the
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house
became more popular after 5 years.

Looking at the
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, The data for choosing
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house
in
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victoria
was the highest with 79
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percent
in the year 2001 which was
nearly
80 times higher than that of
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other
. The figures for semi-attached
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house
and flat were similar with 11 and 9
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percent
respectively
. After 5 years, whereas this area
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saw
a decline by 3
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in the data for
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house
, a rise of 1
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for semi-attached
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house
, flat and
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other
was witnessed
. To
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territory, this location experienced
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a
highest upward trend by 12
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for
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other
and a downward trend by 2
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for
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house
.

Over 5-year period, compared to
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other
locations,
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only
the figure for
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house
in Tasmania rose by 1
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. While this place witnessed a fell by 1
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in
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other
, the percentages of semi-attached
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and flat grew 1
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.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS academic the table below shows the percentage of main types of dwelling in Victoria, the Northern Territory, and Tasmania.

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186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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