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the table below shows the cinema viewing figures for different types of films by country, in millions v.2

the table below shows the cinema viewing figures for different types of films by country, in millions v. 2
The graph illustrates the average number of movie-fans from different countries prefer to watch films at the cinema. In general, it is plainly visible that Indians are the best cinema audience. Another interesting point is that while the action is the most watched movie genre, the horror is the least one. A closer look to the details reveals that Indian people prefer to watch more films at the cinema than other nationalities, nearly under a quarter millions. As regards the most popular genre, the action has the highest ratio of watching, about one-third million. However, the horror has the lowest one, respectively above the tenth million. With respect to the lowest figures, Japanese people were the least attendees of cinemas, nearly 2 million. Subsequent nationalities share roughly the same ratio in attending the cinema. Regards the genres viewing figures are fluctuating between 4 and 5 million. The obvious difference is in watching the horror movies. As Irish people have the most of their share of enjoying this genre than the others, standing at 6. 4 million.
The graph illustrates the average number of movie-fans from
different
countries prefer to
watch
films at the
cinema
.
In general
, it is
plainly
visible that Indians are the best
cinema
audience. Another interesting point is that while the action is the most
watched
movie
genre
, the horror is the least one.

A closer look to the
details
reveals that Indian
people
prefer to
watch
more films at the
cinema
than other nationalities,
nearly
under a quarter
millions
. As regards the most popular
genre
, the action has the highest ratio of watching, about one-third
million
.
However
, the horror has the lowest one,
respectively
above the tenth million.

With respect to the lowest figures, Japanese
people
were the least attendees of
cinemas
,
nearly
2
million
. Subsequent nationalities share roughly the same ratio in attending the
cinema
. Regards the genres viewing figures are fluctuating between 4 and 5
million
. The obvious difference is in watching the horror movies. As Irish
people
have the most of their share of enjoying this
genre
than the others, standing at 6. 4
million
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic the table below shows the cinema viewing figures for different types of films by country, in millions v. 2

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