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The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary. v.3

The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.
In the given bar chart, the export trade of Scotland to the rest of the UK and to the rest of world in 2014 can be observed, which is being measured in pounds. The overall export of Scotland to rest of the world was greater than the export to the rest of the UK, except in Electrical and Instrument Engineering domain. The export of Scotland to UK was greater than the rest of the world only in Electrical and Instruments Engineering. Analyzing the bars, it can be seen that Business Services and Finance export category is contributing 13. 8 billion pounds to rest of the world. The exports of Scotland to the UK maxed out at 5 billion pounds in the Chemicals and Mineral products division. The minimum export to the rest of the world was in Agriculture, Forestry and Mining group, being a mere 2. 4 billion pounds, whereas the lowest export contribution to rest of UK was 0. 6 billion pounds, observed in the same domain. In conclusion, Scotland’s export to rest of UK is overshadowed by its exports to rest of the world.
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trade of Scotland to the
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rest
of the UK and to the
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rest
of
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world
in 2014 can
be observed
, which is
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in pounds.

The
overall
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export
of Scotland to
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rest
of the
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world
was greater than the
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export
to the
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rest
of the UK, except in Electrical and Instrument Engineering domain. The
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export
of Scotland to UK was greater than the
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rest
of the
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world
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only
in Electrical and Instruments Engineering.

Analyzing the bars, it can be
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seen
that Business Services and Finance
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export
category is contributing 13. 8
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billion
pounds to
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rest
of the
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world
. The
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exports
of Scotland to the UK maxed out at 5
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billion
pounds in the Chemicals and Mineral
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products
division. The minimum
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export
to the
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rest
of the
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world
was in Agriculture, Forestry and Mining group, being a mere 2. 4
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billion
pounds, whereas the lowest
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export
contribution to
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rest
of UK was 0. 6
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billion
pounds, observed in the same domain.

In conclusion
, Scotland’s
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export
to
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rest
of UK
is overshadowed
by its
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exports
to
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rest
of the
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world
.
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30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.

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4 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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