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The table below shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions. v.2

The table below shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions. v. 2
The given data compares the movie audiences from four different genres across four different countries. In general, action movies were the most popular among the audiences while Indian cinema goers were the highest in number. According to the table data, approximately 25 million audiences in India watched movies which represented the highest number of movie audiences while with slightly more than 23 million viewers, Ireland proclaims the second position. New Zealand has got about 20 million movie goers while it was the least (about 18 million) in Japan. Indian audiences preferred action, romance and comedy movies while they ignored the horror movies. Action movies got the highest number of audiences in these countries with about 30 million total audiences. Romance movies were enjoyed by just over 20 million people and it was the least preferred movie category in Ireland. Comedy stands at the third position in terms of its total audience and was least popular in New Zealand. Horror movies attracted the least number of movie lowers but were most popular in Ireland. More than 6 million Irish watched horror movies and that was higher than the audiences of romantic and comedy movies.
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data compares the
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audiences
from four
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different
genres across four
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countries.
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, action
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movies
were the most popular among the
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audiences
while Indian cinema goers were the
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highest in number
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According to the table data, approximately 25
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million
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audiences
in India
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watched
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movies
which represented the highest number of
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movie
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audiences
while with
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more than 23
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million
viewers, Ireland proclaims the second position. New Zealand has
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about 20
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million
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movie
goers while it was the least (about 18
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million)
in Japan.

Indian
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audiences
preferred action, romance and comedy
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movies
while they
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ignored
the horror
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movies
. Action
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movies
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got
the highest number of
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audiences
in these countries with about 30
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million
total
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audiences
. Romance
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movies
were enjoyed
by
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over 20
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million
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people
and it was the least preferred
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movie
category in Ireland. Comedy stands at the third position in terms of its total
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audience
and was least popular in New Zealand. Horror
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movies
attracted the least number of
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lowers
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were most popular in Ireland. More than 6
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million
Irish
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watched
horror
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movies
and that was higher than the
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audiences
of romantic and comedy
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movies
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IELTS academic The table below shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions. v. 2

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