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The table below shows information about three different types of restaurants. v.2

The table below shows information about three different types of restaurants. v. 2
The table compares the costs of the lunch and dinner and shows the average time people spent while having lunch and dinner in three different types of restaurants. A glance at the graph reveals that the cost of lunch is less expensive than dinner served at a restaurant. According to the table data, the meal price in a sit-down restaurant, cafeteria and fast food restaurant varies. When comparing the cost of the restaurant, dinner is more expensive than lunch in a restaurant. The meal served in these three types of restaurant have one thing in common – customer spend more time on a restaurant where the meal is expensive. For example, people spend only 20 minutes on a fast food restaurant for the lunch and it costs them less than 5 dollars while a 45 minutes lunch in a sit-down restaurant costs 10 dollar. Interestingly, people spend more time in a restaurant during their dinner than they do while having their lunch. On an average, they spend 15 minutes more during dinner except in a fast food shop. The meals in a sit-down restaurant is more expensive than that of a cafeteria and fast food restaurant. For instance, dinner in a sit-down restaurant costs as high as 17 dollar which is more than thrice than the price of dinner in a fast food shop.
The table compares the
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costs
of the lunch and
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dinner
and
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shows
the average time
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people
spent while having lunch and
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dinner
in three
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different
types of
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restaurants
. A glance at the graph reveals that the
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cost
of lunch is less
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expensive
than
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dinner
served at a restaurant.

According to the table data, the
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meal
price in a
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sit-down
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restaurant
, cafeteria and
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fast
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food
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restaurant
varies. When comparing the
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cost
of the
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restaurant
,
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dinner
is more
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expensive
than lunch in a
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restaurant
. The
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meal
served in these three types of
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restaurant
have one thing in common
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–
customer
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spend
more time on a
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restaurant
where the
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meal
is
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expensive
.
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,
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people
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spend
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only
20 minutes on a
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fast
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food
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restaurant
for the lunch and it
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costs
them less than 5 dollars while a 45 minutes lunch in a
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sit-down
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restaurant
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costs
10
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dollar
.
Interestingly
,
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people
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spend
more time in a
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restaurant
during their
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dinner
than they do while having their lunch. On an average, they
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spend
15 minutes more during
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dinner
except in a
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fast
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food
shop. The
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meals
in a
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sit-down
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restaurant
is more
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expensive
than that of a cafeteria and
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fast
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food
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restaurant
.
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,
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dinner
in a
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sit-down
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restaurant
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costs
as high as 17
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dollar
which is more than thrice than the price of
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dinner
in a
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fast
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food
shop.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
53Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table below shows information about three different types of restaurants. v. 2

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
224 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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