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The graph below shows the effects of different brands of fertilizer on bean plant growth. v.1

The graph below shows the effects of different brands of fertilizer on bean plant growth. v. 1
The illustration gives data on the effects of five different fertilizers on the growth of bean plants. As can be seen from the given diagram, Granny’s Bloomers and K Mark fertilizers help grow the bean plant more than other fertilizer brands. The column graph indicates that Granny’s Bloomers is the most effective compost as it helps grow the bean plant the highest, which is 28 centimeters. The average height of bean plants is 22 cm when K Mark fertilizer is applied. The growth of bean plants from Job’s House Plant Spikers fertilizer is about 16 cm on an average. Interestingly, bean plants’ height goes as high as 12 cm without any fertilizer being used which is almost double that the height bean plants gain from Miracle Gro fertilizer. In summary, in terms of the efficiency on bean plants’ growth, Granny’s Bloomers is the best fertilizer while Miracle Gro is so far the worst fertilizer. Natural growth of bean plants is higher than the effects of Miracle Gro but less than the growth of bean plants with the utilization of Job’s House Plant Spikers fertilizer.
The illustration gives data on the effects of five
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the highest, which is 28 centimeters. The average height of
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is 22 cm when K Mark
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, Granny’s Bloomers is the best
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the effects of different brands of fertilizer on bean plant growth. v. 1

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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