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The table below shows information about three different types of restaurants. v.1

The table below shows information about three different types of restaurants. v. 1
The table data gives information on the average cost of lunch and dinner in three types of restaurants and also reveals the average time people spend on these restaurants. Overall, sit-down restaurants are more expensive and people spend more time on sit-down restaurants than they do in cafeterias and fast food restaurants. As can be seen from the given data, lunch cost $10 in a sit-down restaurant which is 3 dollars higher than the cost of lunch in a cafeteria. Finally, the cheapest lunch could be found in a fast food restaurant which costs 4. 5 dollars. During the lunch, people spend 45 minutes in a sit-down restaurant while they stay 30 and 20 minutes respectively in a café and fast food shop. On the other hand, dinners are expensive than the lunch and people spend more time on a restaurant for having the dinner than they do during lunch. Dinner costs $17 in a sit-down restaurant which is $7 higher than the cost of lunch in the same type of restaurant. People spend an hour to have their dinner. Similarly, dinner in a cafeteria costs $9. 50 which is almost double than the cost of dinner in a fast food shop. People spend 45 minutes to have their dinner, on an average, when they dine in a cafeteria but take only 20 minutes when they have their dinners in a fast food shop.
The table data gives information on the average
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cost
of lunch and
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dinner
in three types of
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restaurants
and
also
reveals the average time
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people
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spend
on these
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restaurants
.
Overall
,
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sit-down
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restaurants
are more expensive and
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people
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spend
more time on
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sit-down
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restaurants
than they do in
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cafeterias
and
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fast
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food
restaurants.

As can be
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seen
from the
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given
data, lunch
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cost
$10 in a
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sit-down
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restaurant
which is 3 dollars higher than the
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cost
of lunch in a
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cafeteria
.
Finally
, the cheapest lunch could
be found
in a
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fast
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food
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restaurant
which
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costs
4. 5 dollars. During the lunch,
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people
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spend
45 minutes in a
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sit-down
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restaurant
while they stay 30 and 20 minutes
respectively
in a café and
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fast
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food
shop.
On the other hand
,
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dinners
are expensive than the lunch and
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people
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spend
more time on a
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restaurant
for having the
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dinner
than they do during lunch.
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Dinner
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costs
$17 in a
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sit-down
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restaurant
which is $7 higher than the
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cost
of lunch in the same type of
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restaurant
.
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People
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spend
an hour to have their
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dinner
.
Similarly
,
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dinner
in a
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cafeteria
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costs
$9. 50 which is almost
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double
than the
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cost
of
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dinner
in a
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fast
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food
shop.
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People
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spend
45 minutes to have their
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dinner
, on an average, when they dine in a
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cafeteria
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but
take
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only
20 minutes when they have their
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dinners
in a
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fast
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food
shop.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
58Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below shows information about three different types of restaurants. v. 1

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
234 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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