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The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. v.5

The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. v. 5
The given illustration compares the amounts spent on restaurant foods and on home cooking foods in four different years and gives data on the number of meals eaten in two different restaurant types. As is presented in the pie chart, initially in 1970, 90% of total food budget was spent on home-made foods while only 10% was spent on restaurant foods. The amount spent on restaurant meals increased to 15% in 1980 while it reached to 35% in 1990. Finally, in 200, an average family spent half of the total budget in restaurant meals and that shows a rapid increase in the people’s habit of having meals in restaurants. In the line graph, we can observe that in 1970, the fast foods and sit-down restaurant meals were taken 20 thousand times each and over time these numbers kept increasing. Finally, in 2000, more than 90 thousand fast food meals were eaten while the sit-down restaurant meals were eaten 50 thousand times a year. This indicates the changes in people’s habit of eating out and the popularity of restaurant foods over the home-made foods. In summary, over the 30 years’ time, people adopted the habit of eating out at restaurant and sit-down restaurant gained more popularity over the fast food shops.
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illustration compares the amounts
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spent
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restaurant
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foods
and on home cooking
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in four
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years and gives data on the number of
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meals
eaten in two
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restaurant
types.

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is presented
in the pie chart,
initially
in 1970, 90% of total
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food
budget was
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spent
on home-made
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foods
while
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only
10% was
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on
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restaurant
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foods
. The amount
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spent
on
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restaurant
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meals
increased to 15% in 1980 while it reached to 35% in 1990.
Finally
, in 200, an average family
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spent
half of the total budget in
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restaurant
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meals
and that
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shows
a rapid increase in the
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people
’s habit of having
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meals
in restaurants.

In the line graph, we can observe that in 1970, the
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foods
and sit-down
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restaurant
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meals
were taken
20 thousand
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each and
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these numbers
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increasing.
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, in 2000, more than 90 thousand
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food
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were eaten
while the sit-down
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restaurant
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were eaten
50 thousand
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a year. This indicates the
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changes
in
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people
’s habit of eating out and the popularity of
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restaurant
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foods
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over
the home-made foods.

In summary,
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over
the 30 years’
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,
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adopted the habit of eating out at
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restaurant
and sit-down
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restaurant
gained more popularity
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over
the
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fast
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shops.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. v. 5

Academic
  American English
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6.5
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