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The table below show the data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 1998. Summarise the indication by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. v.2

The table below show the data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 1998. Summarise the indication by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. v. 2
The table data provides information about the various books namely fiction, non fiction and magazines had taken by non -book club members and club members in Feb 1998. Overall the people are broadly classified as non -book club members and club members depending on their membership. Non -book club members consists of public, college staff and students. A glance at the table depicts the fact that the public had taken only 122 fiction and 82 magazines and had not taken a single fiction book, in contrast college staff and students had taken 44 and 31 respectively. Lots of magazines from bookshop around 1249, had taken by students and on the other hand they are the one who took more number of non fiction books. Staff took around 332 magazines and 29 non - fictions. Book club members took lots of non - fiction books of about 942, fiction and magazine stood next in the list with 76 and 33 respectively. To Recapitulate, approximately thrice the number of book club members had taken by non book club members. Interstingly more than half of the books taken is by college students, that too magazines stood in prior.
The table data provides information about the various
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, non
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and
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had taken by non
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club
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and
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in Feb 1998.
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club
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and
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members
depending on their membership. Non
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consists of public, college staff and students.

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only
122
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fiction
and 82
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magazines
and had not taken a single
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fiction
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book
,
in contrast
college staff and students had taken 44 and 31
respectively
. Lots of
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magazines
from bookshop around 1249, had taken by students and
on the other hand
they are the one who took more number of non
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fiction
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books
. Staff took around 332
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magazines
and 29 non
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-
fictions.

Book
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took lots of non
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-
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fiction
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books
of about 942,
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fiction
and
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magazine
stood
next
in the list with 76 and 33
respectively
.

To Recapitulate, approximately thrice the number of
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club
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had taken by non
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.
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Interstingly
more than half of the
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taken is by college students, that too
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stood in prior.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below show the data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 1998. Summarise the indication by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. v. 2

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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