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the table below highlight data on the number of travellers using three major British airport between 1998 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

the table below highlight data on the number of travellers using three major British airport between 1998 and 2003.
The table indicates information about how many visitors used three major British airports over the six-year period, from 1998 to 2003. The figures are given in millions. Overall, it is interesting to note that there was a upward trend in the number of passengers who chose Heathrow, Gatwick or Stansted airport. Besides, what stands out from the table is that except in 2000, travellers who used Gatwick airport were much more popular than two remaining airport. Looking at the detail, as regards the number of travellers using Gatwick airport, it started at 36, 5 million, which was the highest proportion in 1998. Subsequently, the figure was followed by a steady and considerable increase to reach a high of 69, 3 million in 2003. If we looking at Heathrow airport, the number of passengers began at 27, 2 million. There was a sharp rise by 21 million in 2000 before keeping in a gradual decrease to just 33, 2 million in 2002, which meant that in 2000, a higher number of travellers used it than other airports. At this point, the figure recovered to become the second popular airport among three ones in 2003 (45, 6 million). As for the figure of Stansted airport, the number of people who used it climbed sharply in the first three years, from 17, 3 million in 1998 to 39, 9 million in 2000. Having a significant rise to 43, 3 million in 2001, the figure the remained stable.
The table indicates information about how
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visitors
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used
three major British
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airports
over the six-year period, from 1998 to 2003. The
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figures
are
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given
in millions.

Overall
, it is interesting to note that there was
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a
upward trend in the
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number
of passengers who chose Heathrow, Gatwick or
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Stansted
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airport
.
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, what stands out from the table is that except in 2000,
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travellers
who
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used
Gatwick
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airport
were much more popular than two remaining
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airport
.

Looking at the detail, as regards the
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number
of
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travellers
using Gatwick
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airport
, it
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started
at 36, 5
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million
, which was the highest proportion in 1998.
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, the
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was followed
by a steady and considerable increase to reach a high of 69, 3
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million
in 2003.

If
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at Heathrow
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airport
, the
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of passengers began at 27, 2
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million
. There was a sharp rise by 21
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million
in 2000
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keeping in a gradual decrease to
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33, 2
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million
in 2002, which meant that in 2000, a higher
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of
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travellers
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used
it than other
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airports
. At this point, the
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recovered to become the second popular
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airport
among three
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in 2003 (45, 6
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million)
. As for the
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of
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Stansted
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, the
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people
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it climbed
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three years, from 17, 3
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million
in 1998 to 39, 9
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million
in 2000. Having a significant rise to 43, 3
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million
in 2001, the
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the remained stable.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic the table below highlight data on the number of travellers using three major British airport between 1998 and 2003.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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