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The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London. v.2

The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London. v. 2
The table shows two sets of related information- the relative weekly cost, in pounds, for renting a property with one, two or three bedrooms in three different suburbs of London and an indication of the kind of annual salary someone would need to be able to rent property in these areas. Of the three areas mentioned, Notting Hill is the most expensive area with weekly rents starting at £375 (salary required approximately £99, 000 per year) and rising to £738 per week for a three bedroom property and to afford a large apartment a Londoner would require a salary of £200, 000 per annum. Alternatively, Fulham is the cheapest area shown with rents ranging from £215 per week for a one bedroom property to £600 per week for a three bedroom property. To rent in this area, salaries need to be somewhere between £56, 000 and £158, 000 depending on the number of bedrooms required. For those able to pay in the middle price range for accommodation, Regent's Park might be a more suitable district with its house rent from 325 to 650 pound per week.
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two sets of related information- the relative weekly cost, in pounds, for renting a
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property
with one, two or three
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bedrooms
in three
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different
suburbs of London and an indication of the kind of annual
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salary
someone would need to be able to
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rent
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in these areas.

Of the three
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areas
mentioned, Notting Hill is the most expensive
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with weekly
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starting at £375
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(salary
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for a three
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bedroom
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property
and to afford a large apartment a Londoner would require a
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salary
of £200, 000 per annum.
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Fulham
is the cheapest
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area
shown with
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rents
ranging from £215 per
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for a one
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bedroom
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property
to £600 per
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for a three
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bedroom
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property
. To
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in this
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,
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salaries
need to be somewhere between £56, 000 and £158, 000 depending on the number of
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bedrooms
required. For those able to pay in the middle price range for accommodation, Regent's Park might be a more suitable district with its
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house
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rent
from 325 to
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IELTS academic The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London. v. 2

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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