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The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London. v.3

The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London. v. 3
The illustration outlines weekly house rents in three areas in London and the wage recommendation to afford those accommodations. As is obvious, more the room number in a house, more the rent and property renting in Notting Hill is expensive. As is presented in the table, Notting Hill’s house rent is the highest among the three given areas where a single bedroom house is usually rented at 375 pounds per week. It is advised that someone should earn over 98 thousand pounds in a year to afford such a living place in Notting Hill. Two-bedroom property in this area would cost £485 while it would be as high as £738 for a three-bedroom apartment. The renter’s yearly wage should be higher than 127 thousand and 190 thousand respectively to afford two and three-bedroom apartments. House rent at Regent’s Park is higher than that of Fulham but lower than the rent in Notting Hill. House with one, two and three bedrooms in Regent’s Park would cost 325, 450 and 650 pounds consecutively and to rent a house in this area someone needs an annual salary between 85 thousand and 170 pounds. House rent is in Fulham is cheapest, 215 for one and 600 for three-bedroom property and someone needs to have a yearly earning of over 157 thousand pounds to afford a three bedroom apartment and not less than 56, 500 pounds to live in a one-bedroom flat.
The illustration outlines weekly
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house
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rents
in three
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areas
in London and the wage recommendation to
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afford
those accommodations. As is obvious, more the room number in a
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house
, more the
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rent
and property renting in Notting
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Hill
is expensive.

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in the table, Notting
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Hill’s
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house
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rent
is the highest among the three
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given
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areas
where a single bedroom
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house
is
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rented at
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375 pounds
per week. It
is advised
that someone should earn over 98 thousand pounds in a year to
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afford
such a living place in Notting
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Hill
. Two-bedroom property in this
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area
would cost £485 while it would be as high as £738 for a three-bedroom apartment. The renter’s yearly wage should be higher than 127 thousand and 190 thousand
respectively
to
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afford
two and three-bedroom apartments.

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House
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rent
at Regent’s Park is higher than that of
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Fulham
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but
lower than the
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rent
in Notting
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Hill
.
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House
with one, two and three bedrooms in Regent’s Park would cost 325, 450 and
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650 pounds
consecutively
and to
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rent
a
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house
in this
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area
someone needs an annual salary between 85 thousand and
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170 pounds
.
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House
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rent
is in
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Fulham
is cheapest, 215 for one and 600 for three-bedroom property and someone needs to have a yearly earning of over 157 thousand pounds to
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afford
a
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three bedroom
apartment and not less than 56,
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500 pounds
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live
in a one-bedroom flat.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London. v. 3

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
237 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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