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The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012. v.3

The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012. v. 3
The presented table compares the number of passengers in three major German airports between 2007 and 2012. The Frankfurt airport served more passengers than other airports and air travellers in these airports more than doubled in five years. As is provided as a census of a perusal, the given illustration gives passenger numbers at Dusseldorf, Berlin Tegel and Frankfurt airports. Initially, in 2007, more than 36 million people used Frankfurt airport, while 17. 3 million preferred Berlin Tegel airport. Dusseldorf airport, in this year, receipted 27. 2 million travellers. The number of Dusseldorf airport passengers swelled up until 2009 and reached to 48. 2 million as peak and then declined its proportion till 2011 and met 33. 2 million and then this ratio plunged to 45. 6 million in 2012. In the similar fashion, Berlin Tegel's passenger increased with mild tilt until 2008 and spouted with a steep slope and received 39. 9 million travellers in 2009. After that, it served to 43. 3 million commuters in 2010 and tended with no fluctuation until  2012. The quota of the Frankfurt airport travellers rose monotonously from 2007 until 2012 with a gentle slope and stood at 69. 3 million at last.
The presented table compares the number of
passengers
in three major German
airports
between 2007 and 2012. The Frankfurt
airport
served more
passengers
than other
airports
and air
travellers
in these
airports
more than doubled in five years.

As
is provided
as a census of a perusal, the
given
illustration gives
passenger
numbers at
Dusseldorf
, Berlin
Tegel
and Frankfurt
airports
.
Initially
, in 2007, more than 36
million
people
used
Frankfurt
airport
, while 17. 3
million
preferred Berlin
Tegel
airport
.
Dusseldorf
airport
, in this year, receipted 27. 2
million
travellers
. The number of
Dusseldorf
airport
passengers
swelled up until 2009 and reached to 48. 2
million
as peak and then declined its proportion till 2011 and met 33. 2
million
and then this ratio plunged to 45. 6
million
in 2012.

In the similar fashion, Berlin
Tegel
's
passenger
increased with mild tilt until 2008 and spouted with a steep slope and received 39. 9
million
travellers
in 2009. After that, it served to 43. 3
million
commuters in 2010 and tended with no fluctuation until
 
2012. The quota of the Frankfurt
airport
travellers
rose
monotonously
from 2007 until 2012 with a gentle slope and stood at 69. 3
million
at last.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012. v. 3

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