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The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012. v.1

The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012. v. 1
The table summarises the number of passengers who travelled through three German airports during 2007 and 2012. As a general trend, the Frankfurt was the busiest air-terminal with the highest number of passengers while the visitor number is the Berlin Tegel airport increased remarkably. As can be seen, the Frankfurt airport served more than 36 million passengers in 2007 when travellers in the Dusseldorf airport was just above 27 million, almost 10 million higher than that of Berlin Tegel. Passengers in these airports in the next two years significantly grew and the Dusseldorf airport served the highest number of commuters in 2009, approximately 48 million. Passengers in the Berlin Tegel more than doubled in just two years. Meanwhile, visitors in the Dusseldorf airport declined but served more than 45 million people in 2012, highest during the whole period. On the contrary, Frankfurt airport received an increasing number of passengers each year before hitting the peak in 2012 with almost 70 million passengers. Interestingly, Berlin Tegel airport was preferred by the same number of air travellers in 2010, 2011 and 2012, which was 43. 3 million, the highest growth compared to the initial passenger number in these airports.
The table
summarises
the
number
of
passengers
who travelled through three German
airports
during 2007 and 2012. As a general trend, the Frankfurt was the busiest air-terminal with the highest
number
of
passengers
while the visitor
number
is the Berlin
Tegel
airport
increased
remarkably
.

As can be
seen
, the Frankfurt
airport
served more than 36
million
passengers
in 2007 when
travellers
in the
Dusseldorf
airport
was
just
above 27
million
, almost 10
million
higher than that of Berlin
Tegel
.
Passengers
in these
airports
in the
next
two years
significantly
grew and the
Dusseldorf
airport
served the highest
number
of commuters in 2009, approximately 48
million
.
Passengers
in the Berlin
Tegel
more than doubled in
just
two years. Meanwhile, visitors in the
Dusseldorf
airport
declined
but
served more than 45
million
people
in 2012, highest during the whole period.
On the contrary
, Frankfurt
airport
received an increasing
number
of
passengers
each year
before
hitting the peak in 2012 with almost 70
million
passengers
.
Interestingly
, Berlin
Tegel
airport
was preferred
by the same
number
of air
travellers
in 2010, 2011 and 2012, which was 43. 3
million
, the highest growth compared to the initial
passenger
number
in these
airports
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012. v. 1

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