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The table below gives information on interest use in six categories by age group. Describe the information in the table and make comparsions where appropriate. v.2

The table below gives information on interest use in six categories by age group. Describe the information in the table and make comparsions where appropriate. v. 2
The liner chart reveals that information of representation on the network use in six types in the chart. There are all age group involve comparsion where appropriate. Moving a quick glance on the illustration there have six categories toddlers and dwellers use the activity in their life. Hence, age group interest get news teenager and old age 70 to 76. Therefore, online games are like to toddlers. It is high ratio in the chart. Afterthat, adolescent are interest to download film in the cell phone in 52 percent. But, dwellers have fall down ratio download film because they do not interest download film. To trigger with, teenager do not like search the product onliine. Moreover, they have reduce the ratio in 0 proprotion. Otherwise, 40 age group interest to reasearch product in 83 percent. Finally, buying a product are same ratio to teenager and old age. To sum up, toddlers are very active play games for online website. Dwellers are interest to product research and buying a product they have increase ratio in the chart.
The liner
chart
reveals that information of representation on the network
use
in six types in the
chart
. There are all
age
group involve
comparsion
where appropriate.

Moving a quick glance on the illustration there have six categories toddlers and dwellers
use
the activity in their life.
Hence
,
age
group
interest
get
news
teenager
and
old
age
70 to 76.
Therefore
, online games are like to toddlers. It is high
ratio
in the
chart
.
Afterthat
, adolescent are
interest
to download film in the cell phone in 52 percent.
But
, dwellers have fall down
ratio
download film
because
they do not
interest
download film.

To trigger with,
teenager
do not like search the
product
onliine
.
Moreover
, they have
reduce
the
ratio
in 0
proprotion
.
Otherwise
, 40
age
group
interest
to
reasearch
product
in 83 percent.
Finally
, buying a
product
are same
ratio
to
teenager
and
old
age.

To sum up, toddlers are
very
active play games for online website. Dwellers are
interest
to
product
research and buying a
product
they have increase
ratio
in the
chart
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The table below gives information on interest use in six categories by age group. Describe the information in the table and make comparsions where appropriate. v. 2

Academic
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4 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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