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The graph below shows average carbondioxide ( co2) emissions per person in the united kingdom, sweden, itlay and portugal between 1967and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant. v.2

The graph below shows average carbondioxide ( co2) emissions per person in the united kingdom, sweden, itlay and portugal between 1967and 2007.
The liner charts reveal that information of represention average carbondioxide emission per person. There are four categories are given like united kingdom, sweeden, italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007. Moving a quick glance on the illustration carbondioxide emission per person in 1967 portugal was rose dweller used carbondioxide emission in metric in 11 tonnes. Afterthat, portugal was reduced in 1987 to 2007. Hence, italy cardondioxide emissions in metric was downfall down in 1967 but it was rose in 1997 to 2007. On the flip side, itlay carbondioxide emission per person in 1967 to 2007 was same ratio in the chart. Furthermore, sweeden was boomed to carbondioxide emission in 1967 was upsurge average in 8 tonnes. Then, in 1987 to 2007 was declined average to sweden tonnes 5. To sum up, united kingdom was fall up tonnes in the chart. otherwise, sweeden and portugal was lowest carbondioxide emision in 1987 to 2007 tonnes 5.
The liner charts reveal that information of
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portugal
between 1967 and 2007.

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per person in 1967
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portugal
was rose dweller
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in metric in 11 tonnes.
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in 1987 to 2007.

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italy
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cardondioxide
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emissions
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it was rose in 1997 to 2007.

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itlay
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carbondioxide
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emission
per person in 1967 to 2007 was same ratio in the chart.
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sweeden
was boomed
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in 1967 was upsurge average in 8 tonnes. Then, in 1987 to 2007
was declined
average to
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sweden
tonnes 5.

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IELTS academic The graph below shows average carbondioxide ( co2) emissions per person in the united kingdom, sweden, itlay and portugal between 1967and 2007.

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