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The chart below show temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate Summarise the informtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The chart below show temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate Summarise the informtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v. 2
The comparison of line and bar graph depicts the information about temperature as well as rainfall in Equatorial and Mediterranean climate. The data given in cu mm and degree celcius. To begin with, as regards Equatorial climate, the highest rainfall calculated in december, accounting for nearly 300 cu mm. It is followed by november, amounting to 250 cu mm. Whereas, other months of year had remained similar(approximatly 200 cu mm). In the case of temperature, it had some zig-zag paths and reached on 25 degree celcius. Now turning to the Mediterranean climate, maximum rainfall noted in the first month, which was 170 cu mm. It is followed by last month, constituting 150 cu mm. The temperature increased on near about 26000 degree celcius between june and july. The temperature of the year stood at 140 degree celcius and 200 degree celcius in january and april, restpectively. To sum up, it is lucid clear that the highest rainfall witnessed in Equatorial climate and maximum temperature noticed in Mediterranean climate.
The comparison of line and bar graph depicts the information about
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rainfall
in Equatorial and Mediterranean
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climate
. The data
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in cu mm and
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degree
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celcius
.

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with, as regards Equatorial
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climate
, the highest
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rainfall
calculated in
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december
, accounting for
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300 cu mm. It
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november
, amounting to 250 cu mm.
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approximatly
200 cu mm). In the case of
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temperature
, it had
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paths and reached on 25
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degree
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celcius
.

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Now
turning to the Mediterranean
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, maximum
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rainfall
noted in the
first
month, which was 170 cu mm. It
is followed
by last month, constituting 150 cu mm. The
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temperature
increased on near about 26000
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celcius
between
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june
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july
. The
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of the year stood at 140
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celcius
and 200
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celcius
in
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january
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april
,
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restpectively
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To sum up, it is lucid
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clear
that the highest
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rainfall
witnessed in Equatorial
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and maximum
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temperature
noticed in Mediterranean
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climate
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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IELTS academic The chart below show temperature and rainfall in Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate Summarise the informtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v. 2

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