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The graphs below shows the weekly earning of men and women for the 16 59 age groups as per their education level v.2

The graphs below shows the weekly earning of men and women for the 16 59 age groups as per their education level v. 2
The given tabular layout depicts the information about weekly earning by men, and women into euros during the age per 16-59 through per education level. It if clear, and coherent representation. Overall, it is evident that the most amount of into masculinity category, and minimum amount ratio in faminine category in both component graduation, and below graduation. Adding from details, that In men, and women categories further divided into sessions graduation, and below graduation. First of all, In men category of graduation session have data from 16-59 that 250, 350, 390, 410, 610, and 690. nextly In another men component that is believed graduation level have been data ratio 100, 200, 310, 400, 500, 500 Respectively. Ultimately, that In women category is data amount differ from men In female session of data from 16-59 that graduation section 250, 300, 300, 300, 300. In another section of below graduation level to data ratio 200, 190, 250, 250, 230, 220, and 250 Responsiblity.
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, and women into euros during the age per 16-59 through per education level.
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clear
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, it is evident that the most amount of into masculinity
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category
, and minimum amount ratio in
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faminine
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in both component
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, and below graduation.

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, that In
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men
, and women
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further
divided into sessions
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graduation
, and below
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graduation
.
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, In
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men
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of
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graduation
session have
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data
from 16-59 that 250, 350, 390, 410, 610, and 690.
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nextly
In another
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men
component that
is believed
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graduation
level have been
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data
ratio 100, 200, 310, 400, 500, 500
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.

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, that In women
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is
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amount differ from
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men
In female session of
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data
from 16-59 that
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graduation
section 250, 300, 300, 300, 300. In another section of below
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level to
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ratio 200, 190, 250, 250, 230, 220, and 250
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Responsiblity
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4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The graphs below shows the weekly earning of men and women for the 16 59 age groups as per their education level v. 2

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161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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