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The graph below shows the acid level from consumption of sugar, honey. eating sweet produce acid in the mouth which can tooth decay v.2

The graph below shows the acid level from consumption of sugar, honey. eating sweet produce acid in the mouth which can tooth decay v. 2
The given tabular chart illustrates the information about through that which tooth because by acid level of mouth from consumption as sugar, honey. the of acid level calibrated by low pH values. Overall, it is evident that either the of acidity maximum to cane sugar or minimum amount of honey. To begin with, this all the process depends upon acid level of mouth from consumption of three sugars, fruit sugar, cane sugar, honey. In first fruit sugar is data of acidity 5 to 35. Although, these would be stable at 25 point. Moreover, In cane sugar are data amount 5 to 40 but this is stable at 15, 30Respectivily On other hand, In third sugar is presence in between of these two sugars. Afterthat, In honey sugar have data amount differ from others. As well as, these have been data ratio 6 to 40 but this is achieved well possion at 25. Afterthat, all this process of tooth decay when PH level incline, and tooth not decay when PH level is decreased.
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tabular chart illustrates the information about through that which tooth
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by acid
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level
of mouth from consumption as
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sugar
, honey.
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the
of acid
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level
calibrated by low pH values.

Overall
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sugar
or minimum amount of honey.

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with, this all the process depends upon acid
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level
of mouth from consumption of three
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sugars
, fruit
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sugar
, cane
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sugar
, honey. In
first
fruit
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sugar
is
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data
of acidity 5 to 35.
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, these would be stable at 25 point.
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, In cane
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sugar
are
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data
amount 5 to 40
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but
this is stable at 15,
30Respectivily


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sugar
is presence in between of these two
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sugars
.
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, In honey
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sugar
have
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data
amount differ from others.
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data
ratio 6 to 40
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this
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incline, and tooth not decay when PH
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is decreased
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the acid level from consumption of sugar, honey. eating sweet produce acid in the mouth which can tooth decay v. 2

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172 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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