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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant v.5

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table provides some details about date opened, kilometres of route and how many passengers per year use underground railway system in six metropolises. It is clearly that London was the first city who had an underground railway system opened in 1863. Moreover, it is the longest system in the world because the route of railway system has 394 km, but annually 775 millions of passengers use this kind of transport. After 39 years, Paris released their railway system which has 199 km transporting yearly 1191 million passengers, it seen is more used than London`s railway system. In terms of numbers of travellers, Tokyo`s metro system is smaller than London`s one, but in every year are transported 1927 million individuals almost double than Paris system. In contrast, the smallest underground railway system is from Kyoto having only 11 km used by 45 million of people annually. Not so far is the Los Angeles`s system with a length of 28 km, opened in 1981, after 4 years of the release of Washington`s railway system which serves 144 millions of passengers.
The table provides
some
details
about date opened,
kilometres
of route and how
many
passengers
per
year
use
underground
railway
system
in six metropolises.

It is
clearly
that London was the
first
city who had an underground
railway
system
opened in 1863.
Moreover
, it is the longest
system
in the world
because
the route of
railway
system
has 394 km,
but
annually
775
millions
of
passengers
use
this kind of transport. After 39 years, Paris released their
railway
system
which has 199 km transporting yearly 1191
million
passengers
, it
seen
is more
used
than
London`s
railway
system
. In terms of numbers of
travellers
,
Tokyo`s
metro
system
is smaller than
London`s
one,
but
in every
year
are transported
1927
million
individuals almost double than Paris system.

In contrast
, the smallest underground
railway
system
is from Kyoto having
only
11 km
used
by 45
million
of
people
annually
. Not
so
far is the Los
Angeles`s
system
with a length of 28 km, opened in 1981, after 4 years of the release of
Washington`s
railway
system
which serves 144
millions
of
passengers
.
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