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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. v.7

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. v. 7
The given table illustrates the customer expenditure on goods in five countries in the year 2002. It is clearly shown that the highest expenditure category was on Food/ Drink/ Tobacco, and Turkey had the highest amount of spending among the five countries. With regard to the consumer spending on food category, Ireland came after Turkey with 28. 91%. In contrast, Sweden had the least percentage of expenditure on food category, which was 15. 77%. On the other side, Italy dominated the category of clothing and footwear with total spending of 9%, was by other countries such as Spain, Ireland and Sweden’s spending were 6. 15%, 6. 43% and 5. 4% respectively. Furthermore, the expenditure on leisure and education was the least among all the categories with only 1. 985 in Spain and in Turkey that was 4. 35%. Other countries like Sweden and Italy had very similar percentages of spending with 3. 22% and 3. 20% respectively. In summary, Turkey made more expenses for the given items in 2002 while expenditures in foods/ drinks and tobacco were more than on other given items.
The
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table illustrates the customer
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expenditure
on
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goods
in five countries in the year 2002. It is
clearly
shown that the highest
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expenditure
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category
was on Food/ Drink/ Tobacco, and Turkey had the highest amount of
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spending
among the five countries.

With regard to the consumer
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spending
on food
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category
, Ireland came after Turkey with 28. 91%.
In contrast
, Sweden had the least percentage of
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expenditure
on food
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category
, which was 15. 77%. On the
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other
side, Italy dominated the
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category
of clothing and footwear with total
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spending
of 9%, was by
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other
countries such as Spain, Ireland and Sweden’s
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spending
were 6. 15%, 6. 43% and 5. 4%
respectively
.

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, the
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expenditure
on leisure and education was the least among all the
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categories
with
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only
1. 985 in Spain and in Turkey that was 4. 35%.
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Other
countries like Sweden and Italy had
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very
similar percentages of
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spending
with 3. 22% and 3. 20%
respectively
.

In summary, Turkey made more expenses for the
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given
items in 2002 while
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expenditures
in foods/ drinks and tobacco were more than on
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other
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given
items.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. v. 7

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4 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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