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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. v.2

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. v. 2
The given data represents the amount spent by consumers in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in three categories in the year 2002. As is presented in the table data, People of those countries spent more on foods and tobaccos than they did for dresses, education and entertainments. According to the given data, Turk people spent the highest percentage of foods and tobaccos amounting one-third of their total expenses on consumer products. Irish people spent more than 28% on this category while people of Italy, Spain and Sweden spent just over 15% for foods and tobaccos. For clothing and footwear, the people of these five countries spent around 5% to 9% of which Italian spent the highest percentage (9%). Interestingly the expenditure in leisure activities and education was much less than the amount spent on food, tobacco and dresses. The highest amount spent on education and entertainment was done by Turkish people (4. 35%) and the least amount spent by was in Spain (1. 98%). No nation among the given five spent more than 5% in education and leisure activities according to the given data.
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by consumers in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in three categories in the year 2002. As
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of those countries
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more on
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than they did for dresses,
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education
and entertainments.

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, Turk
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people
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the highest percentage of
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tobaccos
amounting one-third of their total expenses on consumer products. Irish
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people
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more than 28% on this category while
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people
of Italy, Spain and Sweden
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. For clothing and footwear, the
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of these five countries
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around 5% to 9% of which Italian
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the highest percentage (9%).

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the expenditure in leisure activities and
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education
was much less than the
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on
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,
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tobacco
and dresses. The highest
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education
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by Turkish
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(4. 35%) and the least
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by was in Spain (1. 98%). No nation among the
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37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. v. 2

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3 paragraphs
185 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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