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The table below gives information on consumer expenditure on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Given by the table is the reveal regarding the expense consumed on three groups of goods in five European states in the year of 2002. As can be seen from the visual, most national expenditure originated from food, drinks and tobacco area which are led by Turkey. Among three groups, the budget spent on personal necessities accounted to a large proportion in all five countries, followed by the one of fashion and leisure, education fields. In addition, by analyzing the figure, it is apparent that the Turkish preferred using their expense in terms of both the first and the third group compared to the others, with 32, 14% and 4, 35% respectively. Meanwhile, in Italy, national consumer expenditure hit the peak of 9 percent involved to the fashion area. On the contrary, Sweden occupied the last place in the food and clothing group when having constituted about 15, 77% and 5, 4%. Similar to the Spain, its people contributed around 1, 98 percent of money in terms of leisure and education needs in 2002. The statistics provided a clearer look at how five European nations' consumers dispence their budget on a variety of items in the year of 2002.

IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer expenditure on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. v.2

Given
by the table is the reveal regarding the expense consumed on three
groups
of
goods
in five European states in the year of 2002.

As can be
seen
from the visual, most national expenditure originated from food, drinks and tobacco area which
are led
by Turkey.

Among three
groups
, the budget spent on personal necessities accounted to a large proportion in all five countries, followed by the one of fashion and leisure, education fields.

In addition
, by analyzing the figure, it is apparent that the Turkish preferred using their expense in terms of both the
first
and the third
group
compared to the others, with 32, 14% and 4, 35%
respectively
. Meanwhile, in Italy, national consumer expenditure hit the peak of 9 percent involved to the fashion area.
On the contrary
, Sweden occupied the last place in the food and clothing
group
when having constituted about 15, 77% and 5, 4%. Similar to the Spain, its
people
contributed around 1, 98 percent of money in terms of leisure and education needs in 2002.

The statistics provided a clearer look at how five European
nations&
#039; consumers
dispence
their budget on a variety of items in the year of 2002.
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