The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. v.4
The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. v. 4
The given table provides data about the underground rail transit systems in six different cities namely London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles. The statistics provided are the year opening the railway systems, the kilometres of route and the total number of travellers per year in millions.
As is given in the table, London railway service was the first to launch compared to other five cities, i. e. , in 1863, and it covers a total distance of 394 kilometres. By contrast, the city of Los Angeles has the newest underground railway, which was opened in 2001, and it falls under the second least used with mere 50 million commuters and the second shortest length with just 28 kilometers, whereas the Kyoto railway system stands at the last spot with 45 million people and 11 kilometers length respectively.
Interestingly, the Tokyo rail transit system which was built in the year 1927, has the highest number of passengers, which accounts for 1927 million followed by Paris with a large user base of 1191 million.
Overall, it can be inferred from the presentation that most of the early built and longest rail routes have significantly higher number of passengers, compared to modern and short length transit systems.
The
given
table provides data about the underground rail transit
systems
in six
different
cities
namely
London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles. The statistics provided are the year opening the
railway
systems
, the
kilometres
of route and the total number of
travellers
per year in millions.
As is
given
in the table, London
railway
service was the
first
to launch compared to other five cities,
i. e.
,
in 1863, and it covers a total distance of 394
kilometres
. By contrast, the city of Los Angeles has the newest underground
railway
, which
was opened
in 2001, and it falls under the second least
used
with mere 50 million commuters and the second shortest length with
just
28 kilometers, whereas the Kyoto
railway
system
stands at the last spot with 45 million
people
and 11 kilometers length
respectively
.
Interestingly
, the Tokyo rail transit
system
which
was built
in the year 1927, has the highest number of passengers, which accounts for 1927 million followed by Paris with a large user base of 1191 million.
Overall
, it can
be inferred
from the presentation that most of the early built and longest rail routes have
significantly
higher number of passengers, compared to modern and short length transit
systems
.
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