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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. v.2

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. v. 2
The supplied table gives data on underground railway system in six metropolitan cities namely: London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles. As is observed, London railway system is the oldest among six and has the longest rail route and the most recent railway system in Los Angeles having a small route and fewer passengers using the railway system each year. London railway system was opened in 1863 and has a total of 394 km. route. Paris railway system was started in 1900 and has 199 km. route but has a far larger passenger (1191 million per year) than the London railway (775 million passengers per year). Again, Tokyo railway has the largest passengers using the system and this railway station was started in the year 1927. Two most recent railway stations are Kyoto and Los Angeles those started in the year 1981 and 2001 consecutively and have 11 and 28 km. of routes only. The 11 km. route of Kyoto railway station is the smallest route among the mentioned six cities.
The supplied table gives data on underground
railway
system
in six metropolitan cities
namely
: London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles. As
is observed
, London
railway
system
is the oldest among six and has the longest rail
route
and the most recent
railway
system
in Los Angeles having a
small
route
and fewer
passengers
using the
railway
system
each year.

London
railway
system
was opened
in 1863 and has a total of 394 km.
route
. Paris
railway
system
was
started
in 1900 and has 199 km.
route
but
has a far larger
passenger
(1191 million per
year)
than the London
railway
(775 million
passengers
per
year)
. Again, Tokyo
railway
has the largest
passengers
using the
system
and this
railway
station was
started
in the
year
1927.

Two most recent
railway
stations are Kyoto and Los Angeles those
started
in the
year
1981 and 2001
consecutively
and have 11 and 28 km. of
routes
only
. The 11 km.
route
of Kyoto
railway
station is the smallest
route
among the mentioned six cities.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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