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The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012. v.2

The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012. v. 2
Overall, it can be seen that the highest amount of electricity was produced by Hydraulic source in all years and that the amount of electricity produced by all renewable sources increased over the given period. Hydraulic source produced 3329 TWh in 2009 then for the following four years the amount of produced electricity rose gradually to 3363. 4 TWh in 2012. Wind and Bio-mass sources produced fairly similar amount of electricity which accounted fo 276. 4 and 246. 8 respectively. Then, while Wind production increased significantly over the next 4 years to reach 534 TWh, Bio-mass production experienced a gradual growth and comprised of 326. 2 in 2012. The electricity produced by Geothermal sources stood at 67. 4 KWh in 2009 for the following four years the production raised slightly to 70. 4. Solar produced the least amount of energy among all sources in 2009 which constituted 21 KWh, after four years the amount of electricity produced by Solar raised by five times.
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IELTS academic The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012. v. 2

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