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The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers
The line graph compares the number or passengers that metro station received in Paris from 6am to 10pm.
It is clear that the highest number of people used the train between 8am and 9am, and between 18: 00 and 19: 00. By contrast, the time between 16: 00 and 17: 00 saw the lowest number of people using the service.
The number of passenger rose dramatically from 100 at 6am to a peak of 400 around 8. 30am. however, the figure dropped substantially by around 200 people by approximately 10am. From 10am to roughly 16: 30, there was a fluctuation between 100 and 300 people, reaching the lowest number of people again at 16: 00.
More and more passengers started to take the train from 4pm to around 6. 30pm, with the increase of 300 people. But the figure fell substantially fell to 100 passengers at 8. 15pm. there was a slight increase of 100 people during one hour, but dropped around 90 people at 22: 30.
The line graph compares the
number
or
passengers
that metro station received in Paris from 6am to 10pm.
It is
clear
that the highest
number
of
people
used
the train between 8am and 9am, and between 18: 00 and 19: 00. By contrast, the time between 16: 00 and 17: 00
saw
the lowest
number
of
people
using the service.
The
number
of
passenger
rose
dramatically
from 100 at 6am to a peak of 400
around
8. 30am.
however
, the figure dropped
substantially
by
around
200
people
by approximately 10am. From 10am to roughly 16: 30, there was a fluctuation between 100 and 300
people
, reaching the lowest
number
of
people
again at 16: 00.
More and more
passengers
started
to take the train from 4pm to
around
6. 30pm, with the increase of 300
people
.
But
the figure fell
substantially
fell to 100
passengers
at 8. 15pm.
there
was a slight increase of 100
people
during one hour,
but
dropped
around
90
people
at 22: 30.
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